Brochure 2

2015-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Her Royal Highness Princess Maha Chakri Sirindhorn, the Crown Prince of Thailand, admires higher education of Korea that she visited Korean university for benchmarking of education and scientific technology in April 2013. *Experience of studying in Korea from Thai students I studied Master’s and Doctorate degree of Korean language in Korea as a Korean Government Scholar and now I am working as a professor of Korean language department at Chulalongkorn University in Thailand. I would like to put more effort into Korean language education in Thailand. I was beginning to pay attention of Korea and Korean language, when I listened the song called “Come to me” of K-pop star, Seven. I thought it might be difficult to study in Korea, however, it was such a valuable time to study with friends all over the world and improved Korea language skills with the roommate. Furthermore, I worked as a translator at HRD Korea to support about 200 Thai workers.

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Her Royal Highness Princess Maha Chakri Sirindhorn, the Crown Prince of Thailand, admires higher education of Korea that she visited Korean university for benchmarking of education and scientific technology in April 2013.
>> Her Royal Highness Princess Maha Chakri Sirindhorn, the Crown Prince of Thailand, admired the higher education of Korea when  she visited a Korean university for benchmarking of education and scientific technology in April 2013.
*Experience of studying in Korea from Thai students
>> Remarks of Thai students who experienced studying in Korea.

I studied Master’s and Doctorate degree of Korean language in Korea as a Korean Government Scholar and now I am working as a professor of Korean language department at Chulalongkorn University in Thailand.

>> I finished my Master\'s and Doctorate degree in Korean Language in Korea as a Korean government scholar and now I am working as a professor of Korean in the language department of Chulalongkorn University in Thailand. 

I would like to put more effort into Korean language education in Thailand.
>> correct!
I was beginning to pay attention of Korea and Korean language, when I listened the song called “Come to me” of K-pop star, Seven.

>> I began to pay attention to Korea and the Korean language, when I listened to the song of K-pop star, Seven entitled “Come to me”.

I thought it might be difficult to study in Korea, however, it was such a valuable time to study with friends all over the world and improved Korea language skills with the roommate.

>> correct!

>> or; I thought that studying in Korea might be, however, I had a valuable time studying with friends who came  from different parts of the world and I was able to improve my Korean language skills with my roommate.

Furthermore, I worked as a translator at HRD Korea to support about 200 Thai workers.

>>   Furthermore, I worked as a translator at HRD Korea to support more than 200 Thai workers.

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