broke glasses.
학생이 쓴 원문
In this morning I broke three glasses by my mistake. I was preparing for meeting. Actually It was not my task. The other part of cowoker asked me for helping them. There was a little time to prepare the meeting. so I was so busy. In a hurry I carried the glasses and I wonder If I step down by stair or elevater. at that time my step got entangled and the glasses fall down on the floor. It was start of my monday unluck.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
That was really an unfortunate way of starting your Monday. Anyway, I hope you’d still enjoy the rest of your week.
Take care!
XOXO,
Jenny
In this morning I broke three glasses by my mistake.
>> This morning, I accidentally broke three glasses.
I was preparing for meeting.
>> I was preparing for a meeting.
Actually It was not my task.
>> Actually, it was not my task.
The other part of cowoker asked me for helping them.
>> My co-workers asked me to help them out.
There was a little time to prepare the meeting. so I was so busy.
>> I had a little time to prepare for the meeting since I was so busy.
In a hurry I carried the glasses and I wonder If I step down by stair or elevater.
>> I hurried down the stairs while carrying the glasses.
at that time my step got entangled and the glasses fall down on the floor.
>> Then I tripped and the glasses fell down to the floor.
It was start of my monday unluck.
>> I started my Monday unluckily.
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