Broken cell phone

2017-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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My cellphone was broken at my house.It was really broken.I am really angry.But I don't show my feeling to others.I can't play any games.I have a computer.But there is a code in computuer.And I don't know code.Only my parents know that.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I\'m sorry to know that your phone was broken.

This means that you need to be more careful next time.

Take good care of your old fashioned phone. ^^

I hope that your parents will buy you a new phone.

Enjoy your time at the Olympic park tomorrow!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


My cellphone was broken at my house.

>> My cellphone was broken in my house.

>> or: My cellphone was broken at home.

It was really broken.

>> correct

I am really angry.

>> correct

But I don\'t show my feeling to others.

>> correct

I can\'t play any games.

>> correct

I have a computer.

>> correct

But there is a code in computuer.

>> But there is a code in the computer.

And I don\'t know code.

>> And I don\'t know the code.

Only my parents know that.

>> correct

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