Broken smartphone
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My smartphone was broken. I can't use it.It's really angry.And I start clesh royal arena 1.Now I am arena 3.And king tower level is 4. I will go to arena 8.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I\'m glad to know that you started playing again.
What? Arena 3? You\'re fast!
I think I\'m still in arena 1. hahaha I know you\'re going to laugh at me.
Anyway, see you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
My smartphone was broken.
>> correct
I can\'t use it.
>> correct
It\'s really angry.And I start clesh royal arena 1.
>> I\'m really angry about it. I started playing Clash Royale in arena 1 again.
Now I am arena 3.And king tower level is 4. I will go to arena 8.
>> Now I am in arena 3 and my king tower is level 4. I will go to arena 8 soon.
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