brother
학생이 쓴 원문
my brother is a creature that is filled with wickedness, viciousness, evil and vice ...etc
he has voice as terrible as scratch board..
because of my cellphone's broke i can't recieve your call.
please ,post phone our class 1time.
강사 첨삭
Wow my dear Paul, I like your composition about your brother,kkkk...
Anyway Ill just call you again tomorrow okie?
And just call our manager about your class if you wanna postpone it my dear..
Have a nice evening!
T.cam
my brother is a creature that is filled with wickedness, viciousness, evil and vice ...etc>>correct!
>>My brother is a creature that is filled with wickedness, viciousness, evil and vice ...etc
he has voice as terrible as scratch board..
>>He has a terrible voice as the one you can hear when you scratch a board.
because of my cellphone's broke i can't recieve your call.
he has voice as terrible as scratch board..
>>He has a terrible voice as the one you can hear when you scratch a board.
because of my cellphone's broke i can't recieve your call.
>>I couldnt receive your call because my phone broke down.
please ,post phone our class 1time.
please ,post phone our class 1time.
>> Please just post pone our class even for once.
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