Bucket list
학생이 쓴 원문
I completed some my bucket list
I jumped bunge highest in the world and skydive
I have one more left big one
The list is travel around the world with one backpack on my back
Hopefully, someday i go
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon,
Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In your case I know that you are determined to improve your skills in English.
T. Jeny
>>I have completed some of my bucket lists.
I jumped bunge highest in the world and skydive/
I jumped bunge highest in the world and skydive/
>>I did bungee jumping in the highest skydiving area in the world.
I have one more left big one
I have one more left big one
>>I still have one big bucket list.
The list is travel around the world with one backpack on my bac
The list is travel around the world with one backpack on my bac
>>The list is to travel around the World with a backpack on my back.
Hopefully, someday i go
Hopefully, someday i go
>>Hopefully, I could go someday.
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