budget airline
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There are several budget airlines in Korea such as Jin air, Jeju air, Twey air,and the like. They are helpful to save money and to choose suitable flight time. When traveling countries that are close to Korea, I usually use budget airlines. They provide quality services and are rarely delayed unlike those in other countries.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Your sentences in this homework are really great. However, I just made minor corrections. For instance, in the first sentence, when we are talking about the names of airlines, we usually use capital letters. Just take note of these minor details to make sure your sentences are always correct. You are really doing great in writing!
- T. Caitlyn
There are several budget airlines in Korea such as Jin air, Jeju air, Twey air,and the like.
>> There are several budget airlines in Korea, such as Jin Air, Jeju Air, T’way Air, and the like.
They are helpful to save money and to choose suitable flight time.
>> They are helpful for saving money and choosing suitable flight times.
When traveling countries that are close to Korea, I usually use budget airlines.
>> When traveling to countries close to Korea, I usually use budget airlines.
They provide quality services and are rarely delayed, unlike those in other countries.
>> CORRECT
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