Build up My English Skill !
학생이 쓴 원문
Now I'm studying my major, which is related to forecast weather and climate, to be a doctor at one of Universities in Ulsan. Frankly, I never think that I'm poor at handling English skills. But, at this university, I'm just a poor cuz' all students here are good at using English well - seminars, classes, and etc. are only in English.
I don't want to become a loser. I do want to become a winner. THUS, I took this classes being continous for 4 months, spending my big money with my tears. Anyway I believe that my phome in early morning - my class time is 6:30 A.M. - makes me a good Englisher.
The title is hardly related to my words.
It's just my grumbling, bubble, bubble, and bubble.
Thank you for reading my stuff !
Hope you have a great day !
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You really made great progress. I am so proud of you! You are very clever. With your enthusiasm, diligence and positive attitude, I know you will achieve all your goals. Enjoy learning! :)
T. Nica=)
Here are my corrections for you:
Now I\'m studying my major, which is related to forecast weather and climate, to be a doctor at one of Universities in Ulsan.
>> I am now studying my major, which is related to forecasting weather and climate, to be a doctor in one of the universities of Ulsan.
Frankly, I never think that I\'m poor at handling English skills.
>> Correct
>> OR: Frankly, I never thought that I have poor English skills.
But, at this university, I\'m just a poor cuz\' all students here are good at using English well - seminars, classes, and etc. are only in English.>>But in this university, I\'m just so poor at it because all students here are good at using English well. Seminars, classes, and etc., all are only in English, that\'s probably why.I don\'t want to become a loser. I do want to become a winner.
>> Correct
THUS, I took this classes being continous for 4 months, spending my big money with my tears.
>> Thus, I took these classes continuously for four months spending big amount of money with my tears.
Anyway I believe that my phome in early morning - my class time is 6:30 A.M. - makes me a good Englisher.>> Anyway I believe that my phone classes early in the morning at 6:30 A.M. class time makes me good in English.The title is hardly related to my words.
>> The title is hardly related to my topic. It\'s just my grumbling, bubble, bubble, and bubble.
>> It just contains my grumbling and bubbling.Thank you for reading my stuff !
>> Correct
>> Thank you for reading my stuff! [ Be careful of extra spaces before punctuation]Hope you have a great day !
>> Correct
>> Hope you have a great day! [ Be careful of extra spaces before punctuation]
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