Bullies
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t have any messages for bullies.
However, there are some bully students in my school.
They are usually girl, so they make-up too much and say a lot of bad words.
I try not to involved with them when I\'m in the school.
Also I don\'t talk to them first.
But I don\'t scared of them because they are also same age with me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], thank you for working on your homework. Here are some changes for you to review. The sentences have been simplified for better understanding and rewritten for clarity. I\'ve also made some grammar corrections.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
I don\'t have any messages for bullies.
>>> CORRECT!!
However, there are some bully students in my school.
>>> However, there are some bully students in my school,
They are usually girl, so they make-up too much and say a lot of bad words.
They are usually girl, so they make-up too much and say a lot of bad words.
>>> usually girls who wear a lot of makeup and say bad words.
I try not to involved with them when I\'m in the school.
I try not to involved with them when I\'m in the school.
>>>I try not to get involved with them while I\'m at school,
Also I don\'t talk to them first.
Also I don\'t talk to them first.
>>> and I don\'t talk to them first.
But I don\'t scared of them because they are also same age with me.
But I don\'t scared of them because they are also same age with me.
>>> But I\'m not scared of them because they are the same age as me.
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