bully

2010-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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bully is a bad thing. normally, strong person is to bother to weak person. when i was in 6grade at elementary school, i saw that the situation. forexample, take money to weakperson, hit the boy no reason, and let him do an errand. i am one of the people surrounding them. we couldn't anything to help him. i should have had courage.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tracy, Thank you for being consistent.  I really think that bullying should be stopped because it has very bad effect to the people who suffer from it.  See you later! Love, Verna   bully is a bad thing. >>bullying is a bad thing.normally, strong person is to bother to weak person. >>normally, strong person bothers weak person.when i was in 6grade at elementary school, i saw that the situation. >>When I was in 6th grade at elementary school, I saw that the situation.forexample, take money to weakperson, hit the boy no reason, and let him do an errand. >>For example, they take money from weak person, hit a boy with no reason, and let him do an errand.i am one of the people surrounding them. >>Correctwe couldn't anything to help him. >>We couldn't do anything to help him.i should have had courage. >> Correct

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