Bully
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I haven't a problem with a bully, when I was young. But many students are suffering from bulling these day. If I was bullied, I couldn't stand it. This problem has to vanish in order to make a good society, aren't(hasn't) you?
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Hello Mr. [이름]!
I missed talking to you today :)
I hope you\'re doing just fine.
Thanks for sending in your homework today.
It\'s late, so you should take a rest kkkk
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
I haven\'t a problem with a bully, when I was young.
>> I haven\'t experienced a problem with bullying when I was young.
But many students are suffering from bulling these day.
>> But many students are suffering from bullying these days.
If I was bullied, I couldn\'t stand it.
>> correct!
>> OR: I couldn\'t stand being bullied.
This problem has to vanish in order to make a good society, aren\'t(hasn\'t) you?
>> This problem has to vanish in order to create a good society, don\'t you think?
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