Burshing teeth

2015-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Burshing teeth help our teeth get better. I bursh my teeth three times a day. My sister have little tooth ake and she said it was horrible. We all have to bursh our teeth probly. I bursh my teeth every after meal and not bursh my teeth after eating sanaks Do you bursh your teeth ofen, theacher Mayleen?

강사 첨삭

Hi Min! Happy Holidays!!!   It\'s really a must that we brush our teeth everyday. As for me, I usually brush my teeth twice a day since at work I can\'t really do it. But during weekends, I brush my teeth thrice.^___^ You should also tell your sister the importance of brushing so she won\'t experience toothache again, okay\"^_- Thank you so much for this composition. See you next week.   ~T. Mayleen~   Burshing teeth help our teeth get better. >> Brushing teach keeps our teeth healthy. I bursh my teeth three times a day. >> I brush my teeth three times a day. My sister have little tooth ake and she said it was horrible. >> My sister had a toothache and she said it felt horrible. We all have to bursh our teeth probly. >> We all have to brush our teeth properly. I bursh my teeth every after meal and not bursh my teeth after eating sanaks >> I brush my teeth every after meal but not after eating snack.Do you bursh your teeth ofen, theacher Mayleen? >> Do you brush your teeth often, Teacher Mayleen?

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