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As long as we have enough buses, it doesn\'t matter this law.
People\'s commute time and the number of moving person are is similar from 7 to 9.
These laws cause additional inconvenience and dissatisfaction.
I think Itaewon accident and no standing policy have little to do with each other.
This law looks an impromptu policy.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
Thank you once again for conveying your thoughts.
I appreciate your effort. Have a great day!
Aki~
>>> This law doesn\'t matter as long as there is enough buses.
People\'s commute time and the number of moving person are is similar from 7 to 9.
>>> There is a number of people commuting from 7 to 9.
>>> Rush hour is from 7 to 9 so there are a lot of commuters.
These laws cause additional inconvenience and dissatisfaction.
>>> CORRECT!
I think Itaewon accident and no standing policy have little to do with each other.
>>> I think the Itaewon accident and no-standing policy have little to do with each other.
This law looks an impromptu policy.
>>> This law looks like an impromptu policy.
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