Busan
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Busan is the best city of Korea. It’s because I think Busan is the best place to travel. There is beautiful ocean and many fun attraction in Busan. Also there are many delicious things to eat like seafoods.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름].
Thank you. Thank you for sending me your composition. I can imagine how beautiful Busan is. I hope you can travel and explore to many different places.
~Teacher Erin ^_^
I think Busan is the best city of Korea.
>>I think Busan is the best city in Korea.
It’s because I think Busan is the best place to travel.
>>CORRECT
There is beautiful ocean and many fun attraction in Busan.
>>There is a beautiful ocean and many fun attractions in Busan.
Also there are many delicious things to eat like seafoods.
>>Also, there are many delicious things to eat like seafood.
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