buseiness
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*** What business would you like to have someday?
I will had a business for IT part. but must be safety.
But sugeestions is i didn't good a business.
Why?^^
Because there is a my interesting part,
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Hi my dear [이름]!^^
I think you will become a very good IT technician someday. You really love anything that is related to IT. Oh~ I really hope someday you can do something you really wanted. Don\'t lose hope okay?? Keep on moving on, eventually, you will be successful in your chosen path.
Have a wonderful Tuesday night for now and I will call you later. See ya with your good voice.^^
Janette~
I will had a business for IT part. but must be safety.
>>If I will be having a business, I would like it to be IT related and must be safe.But sugeestions is i didn\'t good a business.>>But, I\'m not good at business.Why?^^Because there is a my interesting part,
>>I like that kind of business because my interest is there.
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