Busiest day
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My busiest dayt is tuesday because it have academy four art ciass, math academy, English academy and
teakwondo academy. It\'s very busy but I\'m sick don\'t go academy.
I don\'t like tuesday. It\'s busy.
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My busiest dayt is tuesday because it have academy four art ciass, math academy, English academy and
teakwondo academy.
>> My busiest day is Tuesday because I have four academy classes to attend. I have to go to my art, math, English, and taekwondo classes.
It\'s very busy but I\'m sick don\'t go academy.
>> It\'s very busy when I\'m sick, I don\'t go to the academy.
I don\'t like tuesday. It\'s busy.
>> I don\'t like Tuesdays because it\'s too busy.
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