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Happy Friday, Teacher Ritch! It's been quite a while since I wrote essay last time. Please correct my following business email. Dear [Name], Greeting from Seoul National University of Education! Regarding short-term culture & language exchange program this winter, we want to discuss the exact visit period. Because Lunar New Year's holiday in Korea will start on Feburary 9, the period most expected is January 28 to February 6. Please let us know your suggestion. Thank you so much! Best regards, [이름]

Hello there, Sill!A very happy Friday to you, too! Thank you so much for letting me help you out.  I made the corrections below, so if you  can check them out.  Have a wonderful weekend ahead and please take care. I\'ll be calling you again on Monday. Happy Friday, Teacher Ritch! >>CORRECT!It\'s been quite a while since I wrote essay last time. >>It\'s been quite awhile since the last time I wrote an essay.Please correct my following business email.>>Please correct my business email. Dear [Name],>>CORRECT!Greeting from Seoul National University of Education! >>Greetings from Seoul National University of Education!Regarding short-term culture & language exchange program this winter, we want to discuss the exact visit period. >>Regarding the short term culture and language exchange program this winter, we would like to discuss with you the exact visitation period. Because Lunar New Year\'s holiday in Korea will start on Feburary 9, the period most expected is January 28 to February 6. >>Since Lunar New Year is a holiday in Korea and it will start on February 9, the most expected period would be on January 28 to February 6.Please let us know your suggestion. >>CORRECT!Thank you so much!>>CORRECT!Best regards, >>CORRECT!Hyunryung. >>CORRECT!