business email

T.Kristel, I need your help! Could you please correct my business email sending to sister university as below? The staff of sister university can't find attached file that I sent him. I want to let him know how to find it. Thank you so much! Dear [Name], Oh, because the size of the file I attached is exceed the maximum size, it was attached by mass storage service. Please try to look at the top or bottom part of email as it contains mass storage file. If there is still a problem, please let me know and I will find some other way to send file. Regards, [이름]

Right away it\'s Wednesday!^^ Enjoying your week? I hope the corrections I made would be helpful. I also hope that they\'ll be able to view the attached file already. See you soon and take care always!^^ --- T. Kristel.^^ T.Kristel, >> CORRECT!  I need your help! >> CORRECT! Could you please correct my business email sending to sister university as below? >> Could you please correct my business e-mail that will be sent to my sister university below? The staff of sister university can\'t find attached file that I sent him. >> The staff of the sister university can\'t find the attached file I sent him. I want to let him know how to find it. >> CORRECT! Thank you so much! >> CORRECT!   Dear [Name],>> CORRECT! Oh, because the size of the file I attached is exceed the maximum size, it was attached by mass storage service. >> Oh, because the size of the file I attached has exceeded the maximum size, it was attached by the mass storage service. Please try to look at the top or bottom part of email as it contains mass storage file. >> Please try to look at the top or the bottom part of the e-mail as it contains the mass storage file. If there is still a problem, please let me know and I will find some other way to send file. >> If there is still a problem, please let me know and I will find some other ways to send the file. Regards, >> CORRECT! Hyunryung. >> CORRECT!