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T.Kristel!
I want to spend more time on writing daily essay, but it is not easy to secure enough time in the office these days.. But I'll try to write it more often! Please correct following business email that I wrote. Hope you have a good weekend and get over from the cold! :)
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Dear [Name],
I received Ms. [Name]-Hsuan's application documents yesterday. Thank you for nominating exchange student from your university.
Regarding her questions,
1. We are receiving documents from sister university until next week. After that we will start admission process and I think she can get the admission letter late December or early January.
2. 2013 Spring semester will begin on March 4th. She can move to the dormitory since Feburary 25th.
3. She will be able to register for her courses when she arrive at SNUE. We have students who assist foreign students' adjustments, so she can get some help from them.
If you need more information, please don't hesitate to email me.
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Hello there!
Writing some essays could help you enhance your ability to use the English language. I am encouraging you to continue it. By the way, there are some corrections that I made below, please review them. Happy weekend~!
~T. Kristel
T.Kristel!I want to spend more time on writing daily essay, but it is not easy to secure enough time in the office these days..
>>I want to spend more time in writing daily essay, but it is not easy to secure enough time in the office these days..
But I\'ll try to write it more often!
>>Correct
Please correct following business email that I wrote.
>>Please correct the business letter that I wrote.
Hope you have a good weekend and get over from the cold! :)>>Hope you\'ll have a good weekend and will get over the cold.
-----Dear [Name],>>CorrectI received Ms. [Name]-Hsuan\'s application documents yesterday.
>>Correct
Thank you for nominating exchange student from your university.>>Thank you for nominating an exchange student from your unversity.
>>OR: Thank you for nominating a candidate from your university to participate in the exchange student program.Regarding her questions,
1. We are receiving documents from sister university until next week.
>>We will receive the documents from a sister university until next week.
After that we will start admission process and I think she can get the admission letter late December or early January.
>>After that, we will start the admission process. I think her admission letter will be available in late December or early January.2. 2013 Spring semester will begin on March 4th. She can move to the dormitory since Feburary 25th.
>>2013 Spring Semester will begin on March 4. She can move to the dormitory starting February 25.
>>OR: 2013 Spring Semester will begin on the 4th of March. She can move to the dormitory starting the 25th of February.3. She will be able to register for her courses when she arrive at SNUE.
>>Correct
>>OR:She can enroll immediately upon arrival at SNUE.
We have students who assist foreign students\' adjustments, so she can get some help from them.
>>We have students who assist and help the foreign students.
>>Foreign students can seek help and assistance from those designated students from our university.If you need more information, please don\'t hesitate to email me.
>>If you have more questions, please don\'t hesitate to email me.
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