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T.Kristel, Good afternoon! Thanks to your advice, I'm working in a good mood now. These days I feel interested in making sentences to express what I want to say. Please correct my business email. I think you can recognize what happens in my office because I show you my emails in detail, kkk.. Dear [Name], We are now recuriting students for winter camp. As soon as we finish the process, I will let you know the result. And we would like to ask you to understand our situation: Unfortunately, due to lack of our staff resources, we can't handle two or more short-term culture camp seperately next summer. We think this matter can be solved by inviting two university, NTUE and NTCU at once and operating a unified program (e.g. 20 students from each university together). Please let us know your opinion. Thank you so much. Sincerely, [이름]

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you again for sending your composition. I am very pleased to know that I am helping tou in my own simple ways. Anyway, please go over the minimal corrections. If you have any queries, please feel free to ask me tomorrow. Take care and keep warm. T.Kristel, Good afternoon! >> T. Kristel, good afternoon!Thanks to your advice, I\'m working in a good mood now. >> Correct. These days I feel interested in making sentences to express what I want to say. >> These days, I feel interested in making sentences to express what I want to say. Please correct my business email. >> Please check my business e-mail. I think you can recognize what happens in my office because I show you my emails in detail, kkk..>> Correct. Just separate 'kkk'. >> I think you can recognize what happens in my office because I show you my emails in detail. Kkk ^^Dear [Name],>> Correct.We are now recuriting students for winter camp. >> We are now recruiting students for winter camp.  As soon as we finish the process, I will let you know the result. >> Correct.  And we would like to ask you to understand our situation: Unfortunately, due to lack of our staff resources, we can\'t handle two or more short-term culture camp seperately next summer. >> Also, we would like to ask you to understand our situation. Unfortunately, due to lack of manpower, we can\'t handle two or more short-term culture camps separately next summer. We think this matter can be solved by inviting two university, NTUE and NTCU at once and operating a unified program (e.g. 20 students from each university together). >> We think this matter can be solved by inviting two universities, NTUE and NTCU, at once and operating a unified program (e.g. 20 students from each university together). Please let us know your opinion. >> Correct.  Thank you so much.>> Correct.Sincerely,Hyunryung >> Sincerely,       Hyunryung