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Dear T.Kristel, I was so busy at the office these two days so I couldn't have classes with you. Sorry for that! Today I wrote an business email to sister university. Can you correct the email please? 1. We will have an orientation meeting for NTUE culture exchange program this Friday. Could you please send us specific program schedule until tomorrow? We want to give them some information and discuss things in advance. 2. Last time we visited Taipei, our students found difficult with accomodations because of cold. We would like to ask you to take necessary measures so that we could stay warm in the dormitory and professor's residence. 3. How many meals are you planning to provide for our students? We wonder if you could provide dinner as well, as we did last summer. 4. On the program schedule, is there some activity like culture exchange program between KoKorean-Taiwanese students? If so, I wonder if I need to guide our students to prepare some things or activities for

Hi there! Thank you for sending over your composition tonight. You always put an extra effort in your lessons. Great job! I placed the corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. I would be more than glad to let you know about your corrections. If you have further questions please feel free to send them over, so will discuss them in class. See you tomorrow! ;) T. Kristel^^ Here are my corrections for you: Dear T.Kristel, >> CorrectI was so busy at the office these two days so I couldn\'t have classes with you. >> Correct Sorry for that! Today I wrote an business email to sister university. >> Sorry for that! Today I wrote a business email to the sister university. Can you correct the email please?>> Correct >> OR Can you correct the email for me please? 1. We will have an orientation meeting for NTUE culture exchange program this Friday. >> Correct Could you please send us specific program schedule until tomorrow? >> Could you please send us your specific program schedule until tomorrow? We want to give them some information and discuss things in advance. >> Correct 2. Last time we visited Taipei, our students found difficult with accomodations because of cold. >> DID YOU MEAN: Last time we visited Taipei, our students had difficulty looking for a place to stay because of the cold weather. We would like to ask you to take necessary measures so that we could stay warm in the dormitory and professor\'s residence. >> We would like to ask you to take necessary measures, so that we could stay warm in the dormitory and in the professor\'s residence. 3. How many meals are you planning to provide for our students? >> Correct We wonder if you could provide dinner as well, as we did last summer. >> Correct 4. On the program schedule, is there some activity like culture exchange program between KoKorean-Taiwanese students? >> On the program schedule, is there some activity like culture exchange program between Korean-Taiwanese students? If so, I wonder if I need to guide our students to prepare some things or activities for >> If so, I wonder if I need to guide our students to prepare some things or activities for that matter.