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2013-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Kristel, I am happy to see you again! During last two weeks in Taiwan, I often thought about you and hoped we could continue the class!! Can you correct an e-mail for me? Dear [Name] Chen, Thank you very much for organizing such a great program for our students and us. Our students said they were lucky to be a member of this program and were happy to make good Taiwanese friends. As for my first visit to Taipei, I had a wonderful time in Taipei and acually felt in love with your beautiful country! Even though you were very busy, you showed us around the city and helped us a lot to experience Taiwanese culture. Thank you again for the respect you show us all the time. We all know that thanks to your effort, NTUE has been growing much as a global university. Your passion in developing and maintaining international partnership is challenging us. I am sorry you are leaving your office, but hope we can meet again soon in Seoul or Taipei. Take care! Best wishes, Hyunryung

강사 첨삭

Hello there! I am very happy that you are still thinking about our class even if you are very busy in Taiwan. I hope to see you soon! Your sentences are correct but I made some corrections and I hope you could read it. By the way, enjoy the rest of your day! T. Kristel Kristel, I am happy to see you again! >>Correct! During last two weeks in Taiwan, >>Correct! Or: During the last two weeks in Taiwan,  I often thought about you and hoped we could continue the class!! >>Correct!Can you correct an e-mail for me? >>Correct! Dear [Name] Chen, >>Correct!Thank you very much for organizing such a great program for our students and us. >>Correct! Or: Thank you very much for organizing such a great program for us and for our students.  Our students said they were lucky to be a member of this program and were happy to make good Taiwanese friends. >>Correct!  As for my first visit to Taipei, >>Correct!  I had a wonderful time in Taipei and acually felt in love with your beautiful country! >>Correct! Even though you were very busy, >>Correct!  you showed us around the city and helped us a lot to experience Taiwanese culture. >>Correct!  Thank you again for the respect you show us all the time. >>Correct!We all know that thanks to your effort, >>Correct! Or: We all know that we should be very thankful for your effort. NTUE has been growing much as a global university. >>Correct!  Your passion in developing and maintaining international partnership is challenging us. >>Correct!  I am sorry you are leaving your office, >>Correct! but hope we can meet again soon in Seoul or Taipei. >>Correct!  Take care! >>Correct!Best wishes, >>Correct!Hyunryung

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