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2018-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Dear [Name], Thanks for saying hello. Hopefully, you are also doing well.&#61514; Please re-approve CW’s report, because it is revised. Sorry for the inconvenience being caused. @Please let me know what the CEO MBR and GLT review are, when your convenient time.&#61514; Dear [Name], Please find the taxi schedule & information below; The taxi driver will be waiting for Simon at the arrival gate with a sign written his name. <Taxi schedules> &#8226; Jan 30, 19:00 Gimpo airport to where to &#8226; Jan 31, 17:00 ? to Gimpo airport <Taxi Information> &#8226; Name of driver : Kim, Wonil &#8226; Taxi No.: 1008 &#8226; Cel. Phone No.: [휴대전화] & [휴대전화] @ Please confirm that which hotel he will be staying at. Best regards,

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Hello Ji-[이름]! Thank you very much for sending in your composition. I’ll talk to you in class. Have a great day! ^^

T. Gracelyn ^^

 

Dear [Name],

Thanks for saying hello.

>correct

Hopefully, you are also doing well.&#61514;

>>Hopefully, you are doing well.

>>Hopefully, you are doing great.

Please re-approve CW’s report, because it is revised.

>>Please reapprove the CW’s report because it has already been revised.

Sorry for the inconvenience being caused.

>>Sorry for the inconvenience it may have caused.

>>My apologies for the inconvenience it may have caused.

@Please let me know what the CEO MBR and GLT review are, when your convenient time.&#61514;

>>Please let me know what the CEO MBR and GLT review are at your convenient time.

 

 

 

Dear [Name],

Please find the taxi schedule & information below.

>>Please choose the schedule. The information is written below.

The taxi driver will be waiting for Simon at the arrival gate with a sign written his name.

>>The taxi driver will be waiting for Simon at the arrival gate holding a sign with his name.

<Taxi schedules>

&#8226;            Jan 30, 19:00 Gimpo airport to where to

&#8226;            Jan 31, 17:00 ? to Gimpo airport

>>Jan 30 at 19:00-Gimpo Airport

    Jan 31 at 17:00-Gimpo Airport

<Taxi Information>

&#8226;            Name of driver : Kim, Wonil

>>Name of Driver: Kim, Wonil

&#8226;            Taxi No.: 1008

>>Taxi No.: 1008

&#8226;            Cel. Phone No.: [휴대전화] & [휴대전화]

>>Cellphone/Contact Nos.: [계좌번호]/ [휴대전화]

@ Please confirm that which hotel he will be staying at.

>>Please confirm which hotel he will be staying at.

Best regards,

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