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Hello Ji-[이름]! Thank you very much for sending in your composition. I’ll talk to you in class. Have a great day! ^^
T. Gracelyn ^^
Dear [Name],
Thanks for saying hello.
>correct
Hopefully, you are also doing well.
>>Hopefully, you are doing well.
>>Hopefully, you are doing great.
Please re-approve CW’s report, because it is revised.
>>Please reapprove the CW’s report because it has already been revised.
Sorry for the inconvenience being caused.
>>Sorry for the inconvenience it may have caused.
>>My apologies for the inconvenience it may have caused.
@Please let me know what the CEO MBR and GLT review are, when your convenient time.
>>Please let me know what the CEO MBR and GLT review are at your convenient time.
Dear [Name],
Please find the taxi schedule & information below.
>>Please choose the schedule. The information is written below.
The taxi driver will be waiting for Simon at the arrival gate with a sign written his name.
>>The taxi driver will be waiting for Simon at the arrival gate holding a sign with his name.
<Taxi schedules>
• Jan 30, 19:00 Gimpo airport to where to
• Jan 31, 17:00 ? to Gimpo airport
>>Jan 30 at 19:00-Gimpo Airport
Jan 31 at 17:00-Gimpo Airport
<Taxi Information>
• Name of driver : Kim, Wonil
>>Name of Driver: Kim, Wonil
• Taxi No.: 1008
>>Taxi No.: 1008
• Cel. Phone No.: [휴대전화] & [휴대전화]
>>Cellphone/Contact Nos.: [계좌번호]/ [휴대전화]
@ Please confirm that which hotel he will be staying at.
>>Please confirm which hotel he will be staying at.
Best regards,
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