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Hello [이름]!!
Thank you for your homework; I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience.
Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.
I hope you\'ll have a great time at work!!!
Have a wonderful day!!!!
T. Jeny
Good Morning!
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First of all, Thank you for your rapid reply!
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>>First of all, Thank you for your fast reply!
My answers to your comment are as follows.
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1) DSL USA(2018-2nd): Please resend your email dated on 02.08.2019
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2) Easy Bio(2018-2019_2Q): I attached cedant`s SOC.
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3) Doosan Group(2018-9th): We are requesting details from Korean Re.
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We will send you as soon as received these.
>> We will send you the details as soon as we received the requirements.
The reason for late submission is change of Claim Peron in Korean Re.
>>The reason for the delay in our submission is because there was a change of Claim Person in Korean Re.
4) Doosan Group(2019-1st): I am sorry I sent wrong documents, I attached Right Claim Notice.
>>4) Doosan Group(2019-1st): I am sorry, I sent the wrong documents, I attached the Right Claim Notice.
5) Husteel USA(2019-1st): The reason for late submission is change of Claim Peron in Korean Re. and O/S until reported now, is nil.
>> 5) Husteel USA(2019-1st): The reason for the late submission is that there was a change of Claim Person in Korean Re. and the O/S was reported nil until now.
6) Hyundai Corporation USA(2018-2nd): We are requesting details from Korean Re.
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We will send you as soon as received these.
>> We will send you the details as soon as we received the requirements.
The reason for late submission is change of Claim Peron in Korean Re.
>>The reason for the late submission is that there was a change of Claim Person in Korean Re.
I`ll await your reply.
>>I\'ll wait for your reply.
If you have any other questions, please feel free contact.
>> If you have any other questions, please feel free to contact us
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