business English 10

2011-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

1.fruitful partnership ->When you want to keep a fruitful partnership with your client,the most important thing is a gaining their confidence. 2.business venture ->Most of major companies try venture business in spite of risk. 3.looking forward ->When I had a hosting job,one of my VIP's said that he would give some present for me, so I was looking forward to his present. 4.contract ->In my hosting job, sometimes I have to write up a contract such as Moter show,G star game show and so on. 5.sign on the dotted line ->Before you sign on the dotted line of an insurance contract, you should read it carefully.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름], Good to see you are continuing to practice making sentences in our class. I see some improvement. Keep up the good work. -RJ-  1.fruitful partnership->When you want to keep a fruitful partnership with your client,the most important thing is a gaining their confidence.>>When you want to keep a fruitful partnership with your client,the most important thing is gaining their confidence.2.business venture->Most of major companies try venture business in spite of risk.>>Most major companies try a new business venture in spite of risk.3.looking forward->When I had a hosting job,one of my VIP's said that he would give some present for me, so I was looking forward to his present.>>When I had a hosting job,one of my VIP's said that he would give a present to me, so I was looking forward to his present.4.contract->In my hosting job, sometimes I have to write up a contract such as Moter show,G star game show and so on.>>In my hosting job, sometimes I have to write up a contract with Moter show, G star game show and so on.5.sign on the dotted line->Before you sign on the dotted line of an insurance contract, you should read it carefully. >>correct

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