business English 14
학생이 쓴 원문
1.concentrate
->If you want to concentrate on your job,you need to give up your private life every now and then.
2.change of plan
->Sometimes I need change of plan in my hosting job because of overlapping schedules.
3.ad campaign
->Major companies conduct ad campaigns neck and neck to promote new products to customers.
4.drop everything else
->Upon occasion you should drop everything else to keep your the most precious thing.
5.clear-thinking
->In my hosting job,when I decide my schedule the most important thing is clear-thinking.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름],
Practice makes perfect, and I'm glad you are practicing your writing skills in English. Take care!
-RJ
1.concentrate
->If you want to concentrate on your job,you need to give up your private life every now and then.
>>correct
2.change of plan
->Sometimes I need change of plan in my hosting job because of overlapping schedules.
>>Sometimes I need a change of plans in my hosting job because of overlapping schedules.
3.ad campaign
->Major companies conduct ad campaigns neck and neck to promote new products to customers.
>>Major companies conduct neck and neck ad campaigns to promote new products to customers.
->If you want to concentrate on your job,you need to give up your private life every now and then.
>>correct
2.change of plan
->Sometimes I need change of plan in my hosting job because of overlapping schedules.
>>Sometimes I need a change of plans in my hosting job because of overlapping schedules.
3.ad campaign
->Major companies conduct ad campaigns neck and neck to promote new products to customers.
>>Major companies conduct neck and neck ad campaigns to promote new products to customers.
4.drop everything else
->Upon occasion you should drop everything else to keep your the most precious thing.
>>Sometimes you have to drop everything else to keep the most precious thing.
5.clear-thinking
->In my hosting job,when I decide my schedule the most important thing is clear-thinking.
->Upon occasion you should drop everything else to keep your the most precious thing.
>>Sometimes you have to drop everything else to keep the most precious thing.
5.clear-thinking
->In my hosting job,when I decide my schedule the most important thing is clear-thinking.
>>In my hosting job, the most important thing is clear-thinking in deciding my schedule.
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