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2011-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

1.absolutely ->This job is not absolutely impossible one if you do your best. 2.lion's share ->I usaually take the lion's share in my field because I am almost the oldest in my colleagues. 3.beat ->I want to beat my weak spirit to be stronger. 4.fast-paced ->Today's smart phones development speed is really fast-paced. 5.competition ->If you don't win this cutthroat competition,you won't survive in your field.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름], Nice talking with you again. You are getting better with your writing. Keep up the good work and lets talk again on Monday. -RJ1.absolutely->This job is not absolutely impossible one if you do your best.>>This job is not an absolutely impossible one if you do your best.2.lion's share->I usaually take the lion's share in my field because I am almost the oldest in my colleagues.>>I usually take the lion's share in my field because I am almost the oldest among my colleagues.3.beat->I want to beat my weak spirit to be stronger.>>correct4.fast-paced->Today's smart phones development speed is really fast-paced.>>Today's smart phone development speed is really fast-paced.5.competition->If you don't win this cutthroat competition,you won't survive in your field. >>correct

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