business English 15
학생이 쓴 원문
1.absolutely
->This job is not absolutely impossible one if you do your best.
2.lion's share
->I usaually take the lion's share in my field because I am almost the oldest in my colleagues.
3.beat
->I want to beat my weak spirit to be stronger.
4.fast-paced
->Today's smart phones development speed is really fast-paced.
5.competition
->If you don't win this cutthroat competition,you won't survive in your field.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름],
Nice talking with you again. You are getting better with your writing. Keep up the good work and lets talk again on Monday.
-RJ1.absolutely->This job is not absolutely impossible one if you do your best.>>This job is not an absolutely impossible one if you do your best.2.lion's share->I usaually take the lion's share in my field because I am almost the oldest in my colleagues.>>I usually take the lion's share in my field because I am almost the oldest among my colleagues.3.beat->I want to beat my weak spirit to be stronger.>>correct4.fast-paced->Today's smart phones development speed is really fast-paced.>>Today's smart phone development speed is really fast-paced.5.competition->If you don't win this cutthroat competition,you won't survive in your field.
>>correct
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