business English 16

1.team leader ->Seeing how among my collegues I am almost the oldest,sometimes I work as a team leader in my hosting job. 2.access ->You have to block abnormal access of various programs to keep your computer in the cyber space. 3.ASAP ->When you are in a traffic accident,you should go to the hospital ASAP. 4.computer files ->In my computer files include very important pictures what has my precious memory. 5.crash ->In compuer 'crash' means a computer doesn't work because of it's system problems.

Hello [이름] [이름]! Thank you for making your homework. I appreciate it that you make time to do it even if you are busy.   -RJ Here are some of your corrections:  1.team leader ->Seeing how among my collegues I am almost the oldest,sometimes I work as a team leader in my hosting job. >>Seeing that I am almost the eldest among my colleagues, I sometimes work as a team leader in my hosting job.  2.access->You have to block abnormal access of various programs to keep your computer in the cyber space. >> You have to block  access to prohibited programs to keep your computer in cyber space.  3.ASAP->When you are in a traffic accident,you should go to the hospital ASAP.>>correct 4.computer files->In my computer files include very important pictures what has my precious memory.>>My computer files contain very important pictures that are precious to me.5.crash->In compuer 'crash' means a computer doesn't work because of it's system problems. >>A compuer 'crash' means a computer doesn't work because of it's system problems.