Business letter #2

Second, we searched all our vendors to get hotstelloy fitting components, but the price is not available. Even though Hotselloy fiting components’ piping class is G12, material is HC22. Would you clarify it? And we suggest these fitting components are supplied by CAD. Third, regarding HVAC control system, which is not good solution for HVAC bidder to configure HVAC control system. Se we suggest how about process control system's company do that. Fourth, we promised to submit our total quotation by 25th of Nov. Even if we do our best to complete it on time, we need some more time to quote Electric and HVAC. They have a lot of considerations for quotation.So we suggest we will follow up by the first week of Dec.

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