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We have something to let you know about quotation. First, Value Engineering should be needed to HVAC and Electric. HVAC System which was supplied to us has lots of auto damper and reheating coil. In our experience, it is over specifications as a API line. Regarding electric, lost of 380 voltage cables connect from incoming panel to utility & alpha building. And incoming LBS(Line Breaker Switch)s also are same to cables. It is not good idea to configure electric. If we change one line of 6600 voltage with transformer and one LBS, direct & indirect cost will cut down. Ella! continue to next day. It is emergent letter so would you modify next day's composition by today.

Hi [이름]!  Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me about electricity. You were very expressive on how you do your job well. Keep it up! Take care! ^_^ xoxo, ~Ella   MY CORRECTIONS^^: We have something to let you know about quotation. >> I want to share to you something about quotation.  First, Value Engineering should be needed to HVAC and Electric. >> First, Value Engineering is needed for HVAC and Electric.  HVAC System which was supplied to us has lots of auto damper and reheating coil. >> HVAC System, which was supplied to us, has a lot of auto dampers and reheating coil.  In our experience, it is over specifications as a API line. >> In our experience, it can be specified as an API line.  Regarding electric, lost of 380 voltage cables connect from incoming panel to utility & alpha building. >> Regarding electricity, lost of 380 voltage cables is connected from incoming panel and alpha building. And incoming LBS(Line Breaker Switch)s also are same to cables. >> and also incoming LBS (Line Breaker Switches) are the same with cables. It is not good idea to configure electric. >> It is not a good idea to configure electricity. If we change one line of 6600 voltage with transformer and one LBS, direct & indirect cost will cut down. >> If we change one line of 6600 voltage with a transformer and an LBS, there will be a direct and an indirect cost cutting. Ella!continue to next day. It is emergent letter so would you modify next day's composition by today. >> Ella, let’s continue this next time. It is just a rush letter so you can modify this by today.