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Kindly correct below bussiness letter that I sent to our supplier. Dear [Name] have imported such kind of package over 10 years by ocean and never experience rusty cans have been stocked in our warehouse. There could be possibility rusty cans package already happened from your warehouse or something wrong with the cans anyway. Only this time we will clean the cans and suppy the products to our customers However we will never do this again. Thus please make sure and be careful of apperence of the cans rusty or not before you dispatch. Best regards [이름]

Hello Miss [이름]^^ Thanks for dropping by from the secretary of the trading company^^. Here are some of the corrections I've made. Please read through them. T'Joan Kindly correct below bussiness letter that I sent to our supplier. >>Kindly correct the bussiness letter that I sent to our supplier below.Dear [Name] >>Dear [Name],We have imported such kind of package over 10 years by ocean and never experience rusty cans have been stocked in our warehouse. >>We have imported such kinds of package over the past 10 years by ocean and have never experienced rusty cans that have been stocked in our warehouse.There could be possibility rusty cans package already happened from your warehouse or something wrong with the cans anyway. >>There could be a possibility that these can packages had already become rusty from your warehouse or there must have been something wrong with the cans.Only this time we will clean the cans and suppy the products to our customers However we will never do this again. >>This will be the only time that we will clean the cans and suppy those products to our customers, however we will never do this again.Thus please make sure and be careful of apperence of the cans rusty or not before you dispatch.>>Thus, please make sure and be careful to send us cans at their choicest before you dispatch.Best regards >>Best regards,[이름] >>M. H. [이름]