Business talking
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I want to have a business talking from next lesson. And I want to change a telephone time too.
I want to have a lesson at 10 : 30 PM.
I think your lesson is very good. I appreciate your kind talking.
These days, I feel a lack of business word. So if you give me a subject of business by week, I look for some word about your subject and I will try to talk about it.
What do you think about it?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I want to have a lesson at 10 : 30 PM.
I think your lesson is very good. I appreciate your kind talking.
These days, I feel a lack of business word.
What do you think about it?
Thank you for your effort to write a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I want to have a business talking from next lesson. And I want to change a telephone time too.
>> I want to have a business speaking lesson for our next term in class.
And I want to change the telephone time too.
>> I want to change my class time too.
I want to have a lesson at 10 : 30 PM.
>> I want to have a lesson at 10:30 PM.
I think your lesson is very good. I appreciate your kind talking.
>> CORRECT!
These days, I feel a lack of business word.
>> These days, I feel the lack of business words.
So if you give me a subject of business by week, I look for some word about your subject and I will try to talk about it.
>> So, if you will give me a business lesson in our class, I will review it and will talk about it with you.
What do you think about it?
>> CORRECT!
[ I think it\'s a good idea if we are going to practice some business expressions. In that way, you could learn some useful expressions that you can use at work when talking to your clients and during business meetings. ]
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