Business Trip
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Tomorrow, I will go business trip with my two bosses.
I had a many experience like this trip. However, it was almost 10 years ago. As you talk with me, I can speak anything in English, but with grammer, I make a mistake when I speak something. I am afraid that he doesn\'t understand what I am saying in English.
Pronounciation, grammer and so on. If you have any idea, please let me know about my warries.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
I will check your sentences. Have a great day ahead.
Tomorrow, I will go business trip with my two bosses.
>> Tomorrow, I will go on a business trip with my two bosses.
I had a many experience like this trip.
>> I had a many experiences like this trip.
However, it was almost 10 years ago.
>> CORRECT
As you talk with me, I can speak anything in English, but with grammer, I make a mistake when I speak something.
>> As you talk with me, I can speak anything in English, but when it comes to grammar, I make a mistake when I speak something.
I am afraid that he doesn\'t understand what I am saying in English.
>> CORRECT
Pronounciation, grammer and so on. If you have any idea, please let me know about my warries.
>> Pronunciation, grammar and so on. If you have any idea, please let me know about my worries.
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