Business Trip

2010-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I went on a business trip to Anyang city 2 years ago. I went there to get a laser education. Since I used a laser machine in company , I had to get an education. I stayed there for 4 days. and I learned a laser from 8 am to 5 pm It was like a highschool. After a daily education, we drank beer together. Nowadays, the technology that I learned is really important for me.

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Going on a business trip is pretty amazing. It is actually more an advantage because aside from learning new things with co-workers, you can also visit athoer places for free!kkkk... Another thing is you can also experience new people having new culture and traditions.. And talking about your business trip, it was so nice to hear that you enjoyed most of it.. I envy you because you can go elsewhere, kkk... Anyway, here are few of the corrections noted in your composition.. Talk to you later my dear [이름].. T.Cam I went on a business trip to Anyang city 2 years ago. >>correct!I went there to get a laser education. >>correct!Since I used a laser machine in company , I had to get an education. >>Since I used laser in company, I had to learn about that tooI stayed there for 4 days. >>correct!and I learned a laser from 8 am to 5 pm >>and I usually study laser at around 8am to 5 pmIt was like a highschool. >>correct!After a daily education, we drank beer together. >>correct!Nowadays, the technology that I learned is really important for me. >>correct!

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