Business trip to China
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Be confident in your skills.
It is impossible to be successful without abilities but it is also hard to be successful if we are unable to cultivate our gifted qualities which usually remain hidden from every normal eye. Bold men with firm determination to attain success are courageous enough to exhibit their abilities But a person must not be reckless. He should take risks where there is a great likelihood of success.
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Maybe, I should go to China for business trip.
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One of the biggest Fair for copper foil,
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which gave us big profits and was recently handled by our company, will held at March 7-9.
>>> which gave us big profits was recently handled by our company, it will be held on March 7-9.
as I was heard, almost all of the Maker for copper foil will be joining that fair.
>>> from what I heard, almost all of the Maker for copper foil will be joining that fair.
It would be good opportunity for us and I\'d love to go, because we\'re looking
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for other maker to prepare sudden tight situation of supply of existing our maker.
>>> for other maker to prepare if in case there is a sudden tight situation of supply on our existing maker.
But I\'m worrying about how fleuntly I can speck chinese if I\'ll go as a interpreter.
>>> But I\'m worried about how fleuntly I can speak chinese if I\'ll go there as an interpreter.
A manager who have been together to China last business trip, really want to go toghther again,
>>> manager who have been with me t to China last business trip, really want us to go there again,
but I can\'t sure my chinese speaking.
>>> but I\'m not confident with my ability to speak Chinese.
Last time, I couldn\'t deliver our intended message to customer.
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Anyway, whether I go by interpret of not, I\'ll do my best every at the moment.
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