Busy day

2018-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Today,I had a busy day.Today was really horrible.It was really cold and I have to go to academy.First I wake up at 7 and watch drama and played game.And at 10 p.m.I went to afterschool math class.I had a English class at 3p.m and I had phone class and I have to go to crazy math class.It is too horrible academy.The teacher is really strange women and it improves to sleep well.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


You really have to study a lot to have a bright future.

That includes studying Math and English.

You will appreciate it soon when you study hard.

You are actually a good student. Keep studying [이름]. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Today, I had a busy day.

>> correct

Today was really horrible.

>> correct

It was really cold and I have to go to academy.

>> It was really cold and I had to go to the academy.

First I wake up at 7 and watch drama and played game.

>> First, I woke up at 7 in the morning and watched a drama then played a game.

And at 10 p.m. I went to afterschool math class.

>> I will go to my afterschool class at 10 pm.

I had a English class at 3p.m and I had phone class and I have to go to crazy math class.

>> I had an English class at 3 p.m and I had a phone class as well. I have to go to a crazy math class after.

It is too horrible academy.

>> It is a terrible academy.

The teacher is really strange women and it improves to sleep well.

>> The teacher is really a strange woman and it makes me to sleepy.

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