Busy day
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You really have to study a lot to have a bright future.
That includes studying Math and English.
You will appreciate it soon when you study hard.
You are actually a good student. Keep studying [이름]. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Today, I had a busy day.
>> correct
Today was really horrible.
>> correct
It was really cold and I have to go to academy.
>> It was really cold and I had to go to the academy.
First I wake up at 7 and watch drama and played game.
>> First, I woke up at 7 in the morning and watched a drama then played a game.
And at 10 p.m. I went to afterschool math class.
>> I will go to my afterschool class at 10 pm.
I had a English class at 3p.m and I had phone class and I have to go to crazy math class.
>> I had an English class at 3 p.m and I had a phone class as well. I have to go to a crazy math class after.
It is too horrible academy.
>> It is a terrible academy.
The teacher is really strange women and it improves to sleep well.
>> The teacher is really a strange woman and it makes me to sleepy.
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