But it\'s my personality :)
학생이 쓴 원문
My personality is a person who works hard in everything.
But it\'s just what I want ti do.
If I don\'t want it I can\'t try it.
That is my failure.
But interest thing to me, it\'s hard work inside to me deeply as mush as I can.
That is my success tip.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann!
My personality is a person who works hard in everything.
>> I am a hardworking person.
But it\'s just what I want ti do.
>> I just want to do what I want to do.
If I don\'t want it I can\'t try it.
>> If I don\'t want it, I will not try it.
That is my failure.
>> CORRECT
But interest thing to me, it\'s hard work inside to me deeply as mush as I can.
>> But the most interesting thing about me is that I work really hard.
That is my success tip
>> CORRECT
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