buy happiness
학생이 쓴 원문
the felling of happiness is depend on each mans feeling.
there is a situation and whatever that situation maybe someone can
think it positively but another can think it negatively.
so i think we can buy the happiness but in the same way we can't
buy the feeling of happiness.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Thank you for sharing me this awesome article about happiness. You did great on this. Keep it up! I know you can do better. You were right we can buy happiness but we cannot buy the feeling of being happy. So, stay happy.
Teacher May
the felling of happiness is depend on each mans feeling.
>>The feeling of being happy depends on every man's feeling.there is a situation and whatever that situation maybe someone can think it positively but another can think it negatively.
>>We can experience happiness in very different ways. so i think we can buy the happiness but in the same way we can't buy the feeling of happiness.
>>So, I think we can buy happiness but we cannot buy the feeling of being happy.
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