Buying Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time tonight.
I appreciate your chant.
Please go over the corrections below, especially #2.
It needs answer that talks about the thing that you are going to buy tomorrow, or on Wednesday or soon.
If you have any questions, you can raise it in our class tomorrow.
Have a great night. See you.
Teacher Nina
1. What are you going to buy?
I\'m going to buy shirts.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question?
>> I\'m going to purchase some T-shirts.
2. What do you need to buy?
Because it\'s cold.
>> It is because it is cold. (Your answer should be, the things that you need to purchase now or as soon as possible)
What are other answers to this question?
>> I need to buy water because I am thirsty.
>> OR: I need to buy some winter clothes.
>> OR: I need to buy more pencils for me to use in school.
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