Buying less mask

2021-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Nowadays, I really want to quit buying mask because we have to wear a mask to prevent Covid19. So, I hope this situation will be okay and better. But, we cannot quit buying this, so, I spend lots of money buying this. If the situation goes on better, I think I can reduce money buying masks. It is definitely wish to everyone.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!

It is my fervent hope to never buy a single piece of mask as it does hard the environment a lot.

For now, all we can do is to wear it every time and be safe.

Someday, this will be over and we shall never wear masks, only when there is one around sick.

Thanks again for this composition. See you on Friday.

-T. Donna =)

Nowadays, I really want to quit buying mask because we have to wear a mask to prevent Covid19.
>> Correct!

So, I hope this situation will be okay and better.
>> Correct!

But, we cannot quit buying this, so, I spend lots of money buying this.
>> Correct!

If the situation goes on better, I think I can reduce money buying masks.
>> Correct!

It is definitely wish to everyone.
>> It\'s a definite wish for everyone.

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