buying volume products

2017-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Hello, I would like to buy your product and want to receive until Friday. And I am about to order so many things. So, I want to have a volume discount in this deal. How many number do you order? If you order over 10000, you can apply two-percent discount. And it is the best we can offer. I will send the detailed price list so that you can make a good choice. I wonder how the method of payment is? If you have any benefit, I will send money right now. oh I can not write this dialogue any more. I have to ready for commute. Please check my sentence. and have a great weekend. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday [이름]!

Thanks for dropping by the board! Enjoy your weekend with your family.

See you on Monday!

~Teacher Eunice


buying volume products
>> Buying volume products
Contents
>> Correct!
Hello, I would like to buy your product and want to receive until Friday.
>> Hello, I would like to buy your product and I want to receive it until Friday.
 And I am about to order so many things.
>>  And I am about to order volume amount of products.
 So, I would like to have a volume discount for this deal.
>> So, I want to have a volume discount in this deal.
 How many number do you order?
>> How many would you like to order?
 If you order over 10000, you can apply two-percent discount.
>> If you will order 10,000 worth of products, we can give you two-percent discount.
 And it is the best we can offer.
>> It is the best we can offer.
 I will send the detailed price list so that you can make a good choice.
>> Correct!
 I wonder how the method of payment is?
>> Correct!
 If you have any benefit, I will send money right now.
>> If you have a bank account, I will send money right now.
 oh I can not write this dialogue any more.
>> Oh! I cannot finish the dialogue anymore.
I have to ready for commute.
>> I have to get ready for commuting.
 Please check my sentence. and have a great weekend.
 Thank you. 
>> Please check my sentences and have a great weekend, Thank you!

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