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2013-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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thank you to praise and advice when i working on the part time job, often met the foreigner they question by english, so i answer by english! it is impossible before don't listen to the class very thank you for you! i am proud of me..haha.... i try the more, and keep it up! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Find one mistake in each sentence and correct it. Write the new sentences. 1. I left the home when I was twenty. >> i left in the home when i was twenty. 2. I moved to abroad in 1998. >> i moved to the abroad when 1998 3. I went university in Buenos Aires. >> i went to the university in buenos AIRES. 4. I got marry to Sarah, a university student. >> i got marry with Sarah, when i was university student 5. I moved into Berlin to study German. >>I moved into the berlin because i study to German.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]! Thank you for your composition! I admire you for being so diligent. You are constantly improving and I am also very proud of you! Keep trying and never give up! You can do it! T. JanE ^^ thank you to praise and advice>> Thank you for praising me and for giving me advice. when i working on the part time job, often met the foreigner>> I often meet foreigners at work. they question by english, so i answer by english!>> They ask me in English, so I answer them in English. it is impossible before don\'t listen to the class>> It was impossible for me to do so before taking this class. very thank you for you!>> I am very thankful to you! i am proud of me..haha....>> I am proud of myself. i try the more, and keep it up!>> I try harder and I keep up the good work!HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Find one mistake in each sentence and correct it. Write the new sentences.1. I left the home when I was twenty.>> i left in the home when i was twenty.>> I left home when I was twenty.2. I moved to abroad in 1998.>> i moved to the abroad when 1998>> I moved abroad in 1998.3. I went university in Buenos Aires.>> I went to the university in buenos AIRES.>> Correct 4. I got marry to Sarah, a university student.>> i got marry with Sarah, when i was university student>> I got married to Sarah when I was a university student.5. I moved into Berlin to study German.>>I moved into the berlin because i study to German. >> I moved to Berlin to study German.

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