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2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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show respect for / without difficulty / have difficulty / get to know / feel at home make friends with / way of life / local customs / it's the custom to / the proper way to When I first arrived in Tokyo, I __have difficulty___ getting used to life here. I couldn't understand things like when to bow, when to exchange gifts, how to address people and so on. But after a while, I _make friends with____ some Japanese guys of my age and I asked them lots of questions. That's how I __way of life___ various things, like ___feel at home__ behave. Every country or culture has a different _____ and I like to __ without difficulty ___ those ways. So I learned how to bow because _____ bow in Japan, even though it's not one of the _show respect for____ of my country, Ireland. Anyway, after three years here, I manage most things _the proper way to ____. Actually, I really __ get to know ___ in Toky

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear student!

Thank you for doing your homework.I know that you are busy but still you managed to answer the given task.I do appreciate the effort and time.

As for the essay, I think you did a great job but you still need to work on your vocabulary to understand some sentences better. Just continue reading a lot of English books for you to develop your skills in comprehension and I will be here to help you out.See you on our next class.

^^T. Jane^^

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

Complete his sentences with the expressions in the correct form of the verb.

show respect for / without difficulty / have difficulty / get to know / feel at home

make friends with / way of life / local customs / it\'s the custom to / the proper way to

When I first arrived in Tokyo, I __have difficulty___ getting used to life here. I couldn\'t understand things like when to bow, when to exchange gifts, how to

 >> Correct

address people and so on. But after a while, I _make friends with____ some Japanese guys of my age and I asked them lots of questions. That\'s how I

>>address people and so on. But after a while, I _made friends with_ some Japanese guys of my age and I asked them lots of questions. That\'s how I _got

__way of life___ various things, like ___feel at home__ behave. Every country or culture has a different _____ and I like to __ without difficulty ___ thos

>> to know_ various things, like _the proper way to_ behave. Every country or culture has a different _way of life_ and I like to _show respect_ those ways

ways. So I learned how to bow because _____ bow in Japan, even though it\'s not one of the _show respect for____ of my country, Ireland. Anyway, after

>> learned how to bow because _it\'s the custom to_ bow in Japan, even though it\'s not one of the _local customs_ of my country, Ireland. Anyway, after

three years here, I manage most things _the proper way to

>> three years here, I manage most things _without difficulty_.

___. Actually, I really __ get to know ___ in Toky

>> Actually, I really _feel at home_ in Tokyo now.

ANSWERS IN TODAY\'S HOMEWORK:

When I first arrived in Tokyo, I _had difficulty_ getting used to life here. I couldn\'t understand things like when to bow, when to exchange gifts, how to address people and so on. But after a while, I _made friends with_ some Japanese guys of my age and I asked them lots of questions. That\'s how I _got to know_ various things, like _the proper way to_ behave. Every country or culture has a different _way of life_ and I like to _show respect_ those ways. So I learned how to bow because _it\'s the custom to_ bow in Japan, even though it\'s not one of the _local customs_ of my country, Ireland. Anyway, after three years here, I manage most things _without difficulty_. Actually, I really _feel at home_ in Tokyo now.

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