cafe
학생이 쓴 원문
Me and my friends made a cafe of our class.
The class president Hwang-in-[이름] is the manager because he made the cafe. The vice manager is Ja - bul ( nickname ) because she was very active in our class cafe. I'm the best member. It's not a higher grade than the manager or the vice manager but, I have the highest title among ordinary cafe members. We are having so fun!! I think this is one of the great thing to do in the internet. It's very enjoyable. Now our clafe has 16 members 83 writings and 254 people had visited our cafe.
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey,
That's nice to hear. I hope to ask you more about your cafe. Talk to you later.
-RJ
The class president Hwang-in-[이름] is the manager because he made the cafe.>>correct
The vice manager is Ja - bul ( nickname ) because she was very active in our class cafe.
>>correct
I'm the best member.
>>I'm the most active member.
It's not a higher grade than the manager or the vice manager but, I have the highest title among ordinary cafe members.
>>It's not a higher grade than the manager or the vice manager, but I have the highest title among the ordinary cafe members.
We are having so fun!! I think this is one of the great thing to do in the internet.
>>We are having so much fun!! I think this is one of the greatest things to do on the internet.
It's very enjoyable. Now our clafe has 16 members 83 writings and 254 people had visited our cafe.
>>correct
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