Caleb\'s homework for 22 Aug 2022.

2022-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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Give some situations where it\'s difficult to communicate over the phone. I wrote received homework as below. In my cases, I have difficulties to understand caller\'s name particulary spellings, if I have idea english name what I heard before it\'s easy to understand but sometimes I cannot understand name precisely either spellings. So I need to ask again and again and sometimes asking like \"please speak your name slowly\" to caller, the reason why I\'m asking user\'s name clearly because I cannot access user\'s laptop without user\'s information. -The End-

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Hello Caleb! 
I really appreciate that you do your homework despite your busy schedule. I experience this as well. I agree that it\'s very difficult especially if you really need to get some important information, it has to be precise and accurate.
-T. Caitlyn
Give some situations where it\'s difficult to communicate over the phone.
>> CORRECT
I wrote received homework as below.
>> I wrote my homework below.
In my cases, I have difficulties to understand caller\'s name particulary spellings, 
>> In my case, I have difficulty understanding the caller\'s name, particularly its spelling.
if I have idea english name what I heard before it\'s easy to understand but sometimes I cannot understand name precisely either spellings.
>> If I have an idea or it\'s an English name I\'ve heard before, it\'s easy to understand but sometimes I cannot understand the name and the spelling as well.
So I need to ask again and again and sometimes asking like \"please speak your name slowly\" to caller,
>> So I need to ask several times and sometimes even instruct the caller to say their name slowly.
 the reason why I\'m asking user\'s name clearly because I cannot access user\'s laptop without user\'s information.
>> The reason I\'m asking for the user\'s name clearly is that I cannot access the user\'s laptop without their information.

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