Caleb\'s homework for 26 Aug 2022.

2022-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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Writing task: Why do you think most people consider meetings to be boring? Caleb\'s homework for 26 Aug 2022. This is my personal opinion that the reason why we are being boring in the meeting is that attendances are quiet and listening for explanation or presentation of organizer. Namely, if attendances can speak something often while meeting is on going, it will not be boring. But it\'s not easy to speak often in the meeting if I\'m not the owner of the meeting or superior employee.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Caleb!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree that the lack of participation from attendees makes meetings boring.
-T. Caitlyn
This is my personal opinion that the reason why we are being boring in the meeting is that attendances are quiet and listening for explanation or presentation of organizer.
>> In my opinion, the reason why meetings are boring is that attendees are quiet and just listen to the explanation or presentation of the organizer.
Namely, if attendances can speak something often while meeting is on going, it will not be boring.
>> Namely, if attendees can speak or say something during the meeting, it will not be boring.
But it\'s not easy to speak often in the meeting if I\'m not the owner of the meeting or superior employee.
>> However, it\'s not easy to speak often during the meeting especially if I\'m not the host or the superior.

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