Caleb\'s homework for 31 Aug 2022.
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In my opinion, many retail shops are located near my home and it\'s closer than wholesale shops.
And we can prevent to purchase goods that we don\'t need to buy.
But good\'s price is not cheaper than wholesale shops if there is no specail sale.
강사 첨삭
Good day Caleb!
I agree that buying on retail shops may be more expensive but at the same time, can help you avoid buying things that you don\'t really need.
-T. Caitlyn
In my opinion, many retail shops are located near my home and it\'s closer than wholesale shops.>> CORRECT
And we can prevent to purchase goods that we don\'t need to buy.
>> We can prevent purchasing goods that we don\'t need.
But good\'s price is not cheaper than wholesale shops if there is no specail sale.
But good\'s price is not cheaper than wholesale shops if there is no specail sale.
>> Also, the prices of goods are more expensive than wholesale shops especially if it\'s not on sale.
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