Call

2023-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

I have expectation for you to you can call well use English. But you hesitate to call. You don\'t turn off your new cellphone because you call very many people. And I call you, too.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^

Thank you for answering your homework.
However, you only used the word \'call\' as a verb, but you didn\'t use it as a noun.
We\'ll just talk about this in class, okay?

Have a good day!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I have expectation for you to you can call well use English. But you hesitate to call.
>>> I have expectations that you can use English well, but you hesitate to call.
You don\'t turn off your new cellphone because you call very many people. And I call you, too.
>>> You don\'t turn off your new cellphone because you call so many people. And I call you, too.
>>> OR: Because you call so many people, you don\'t switch off your new cellphone. And I also call you.
>>> OR: You make so many calls on your new cellphone that you never turn it off. And I also call you.

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