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I was really under a lot of pressure because of camera enough to have a nightmare. My parents didn't understand about me. They told me "why are you need camera? If you want to take a picture, you can do it by your cell phone camera." I couldn't understand my parents, either. Gap of between cell phone camera and high-end camera is like between sky and ground. I was so desperate for a camera, but I had no choice but I was cry. My best friend and my boy friend helped me after seeing my stressful mind. They lent some money although I didn't ask their help. I was so impressed! I persuaded my parents again. I told to my parents "my friends gave me a money if I was looked that pathetic." And I worked! Finally I was allowed to buy a camera. I didn't buy a camera yet. I'll buy a camera soon. I'm very happy. It was written before Lunar new year's day. Now I search for a market where sell a camera for low price.

Hi!! Remember don\'t give up and study English by heart, I know you can do it. Take care of yourself always. Thank you for sending me your composition. Teacher Chloe I was really under a lot of pressure because of camera enough to have a nightmare. >>I was really under a lot of pressure because of the camera that led me to have a nightmare. My parents didn\'t understand about me. >>My parents didn\'t understand about it. They told me \"why are you need camera? If you want to take a picture, you can do it by your cell phone camera.\" >>They told me, \"Why are you in need of camera? If you want to take pictures, you can do it using the camera of your cellphone\". I couldn\'t understand my parents, either. >>Correct. Gap of between cell phone camera and high-end camera is like between sky and ground. >>The difference of a cellphone camera and a hogh end camera is like the sky and the ground.I was so desperate for a camera, but I had no choice but I was cry. >>Iwas so desperate to have a camera, but I had no choice but to cry. My best friend and my boy friend helped me after seeing my stressful mind. >>My bestfriend and my boyfriend helped me to look for a camera to ease my stress. They lent some money although I didn\'t ask their help. >>They lend me some money eventhough I didn\'t ask for their help. I was so impressed! >>Correct.I persuaded my parents again. >>Correct. I told to my parents \"my friends gave me a money if I was looked that pathetic.\" And I worked! >>I told my parents. \"My friends gave me money and I looked Finally I was allowed to buy a camera. >>CorrectI didn\'t buy a camera yet >>Correct I\'ll buy a camera soon. >>Correct I\'m very happy. >>CorrectIt was written before Lunar new year\'s day >>Correct Now I search for a market where sell a camera for low price. >>Now, I am seraching for a market that sells camera for a low price.