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2022-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Basically, I take tools for cooking. I cook curry, and spaghetti, and of course boiled rise. Second one is fishing tools. Up to now, I never have gone to fish. But if possible, I will fish for refreshing my mind. Third one is Camera. I like to take a picture not only natural landscape but also human\'s face. etc.

강사 첨삭

Hello Charley!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Basically, I take tools for cooking. 

>> Basically, I will take tools for cooking. 

I cook curry, and spaghetti, and of course boiled rise.
>> I cook curry, spaghetti, and of course, boil rice.
Second one is fishing tools. 

>> CORRECT!

Up to now, I never have gone to fish. But if possible, I will fish for refreshing my mind.

>> Up to now, I have never gone fishing, but if possible, I will fish to refresh my mind.
Third one is Camera. 

>> Third one is a camera. 

I like to take a picture not only natural landscape but also human\'s face. etc.

>> I like to take pictures of not only natural landscapes, but also humans\' faces, and etc.

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